The Eragon Adventure - Comments

Please update this I want to see where it goes

Awesome update!!! I thought you'd died!
This was very good! You wrote their...mind-bonding...stuff really well. :)

:) :) :) I like this story soooooo excited to read this. More please. :) :) :)

Great job you two!!! I love Zysali!!! She's awesome. Please update again soon!!!!

I WON'T FALL BEHIND ON THIS!!! HAHA!!! XD

So...good update. :) Will Murtagh receive a nice greeting or...not? o.0

I FINALLY finished this!!! xD Aren't you proud? Schizzy, at one point you switched from 3rd to 1st to 3rd again. Just saying.

I'm liking this story and I shall now keep up with it! xD

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I have two specific chapters to address. The first is chapter 7- Eldunari are the most sacred and quiet secret of the dragons- there needs to be a HUGE, HUGE explanation for it and it absolutely CAN'T be brought up in casual conversation. In the Inheritance Cycle, it was only made known to Eragon what Eldunari were only at the time of the battle- when he was about to face Galbatorix. It's beyond infathomable that Thorn, Murtagh, Icenia, Aquasari, AND Zysali know about it, and Zysali isn't even a Rider.
For chapter 10, the end was incredibly frustrating and confusing. It can all be summed up in one word- "she". I have never hated a word so quickly in my life. She she she she she OHMYGOODNESS my head was going to explode! Seeing as we, at the time, have Icenia, Zysali, Aquasari, Saphira, AND Arya in question, there can absolutely not be that many "she"s. No way.
As I've mentioned to Ice_Cat, I am completely intrigued by the idea of Morzan returning from the dead. It's incredibly inspiring and I can't wait to hear more because of it. Eragon's love-rectangle seems promising as well. I'd be careful of how much power the characters are given, because it can be rather hard to reduce them once they're there.

I'm five chapters in and I'm starting to cuss myself why I haven't read this!!!! This is great and there's some parts that have made me chuckle! xD Now, I'm gonna go read the next five!! :D

I hope more people comment and that you can update more often. I can't wait to read Inheritance also.

YAY! XD I was mentioned! lol. Haha and I know exactly what you mean about the proofs in Geometry!

Love the new chapter! I can't wait to see if Morzan really did come back from the dead. Please update asap!

Oh I think this is SO cute! I love the romantic parts! Keep writing! If not for the world then for me! I want to write some on Eragon as well, so maybe I could get some advice as well? The knocking on the door and disrupting the slightly steamy parts is classic haha. Keep up the good work!

No more comments? This is crazy. I'm going to start sending this to people who would love this.

No comments? I thought some one would have commented already. At least you have me!
Yay! Happy time with MurtIce or would it be Iceagh? I don't know, but at least she said yes! yay!