Going Nowhere. - Comments

I laughed so hard when I read that Oli wanted to actually be with Superman. Who wouldn't want to be? I really liked it, especially the flashbacks of when they were younger. The sex scene was amazing hah. Good job (:

I found the sex scene to be funny but that's probably only because I haven't slept in a while. The beginning was really cute and I liked oli's obsession with superman. The whomethingwas kind of adorable to me as weird as that sounds...

I have to admit, the first part of this was sort of...odd. :think: I wasn't sure why it was in all italics, and it took me a while to realize that it was a flashback. Of course, that may be because I'm sick and it's really late. xD Anyway, it might help if you added in a small piece in the beginning that's present time so you can flow into the flashback. Also, it would be a good idea to read through it to catch a few grammar and spelling mistakes. :) I did think it was really cute, and the sex scene was great. :) Very nice job!