Jumping Into Rivers - Comments, page 4

pink tape (100)

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i love this, and I really want to see if they find out about what Louis was going to do.

November 27th, 2011 at 11:24pm

GalaxyDefend3r (100)

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Great update! I have a feeling this could progress into a really interesting story! Can't wait to read more!

November 27th, 2011 at 09:23pm

s t a y y o u n g . (100)

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Very interested in this.

November 27th, 2011 at 07:33pm

Zayn Malik. (100)

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More pleeeaaaaassssseeeeee?! I love this.

November 26th, 2011 at 04:05pm

pattiet (100)

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Ohhh and i'll get my friend to read it aswell :D <3

November 20th, 2011 at 08:37pm

pattiet (100)

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I love this! i think you should update right away! :D :D <3

November 20th, 2011 at 08:37pm

justeva. (100)

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i really like this.
im surprised there's not a lot of comments.
more?
<3

November 18th, 2011 at 05:38am

amortentias (105)

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Dear Lord. Please update this. Ugh, the last few chapters were so amazing!

November 14th, 2011 at 03:33pm

thenewcancer13 (100)

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So, I'm pretty much in love with this story. It's awesome. Also, you're a great writer!I hope you continue to update! I'm subscribing to it! :)

November 3rd, 2011 at 02:13am

love1d (300)

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I subscribed, I love it too!

September 29th, 2011 at 04:47am

LiveInColor (100)

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I love it. It has something bout it that makes me love it. Keep going please

September 28th, 2011 at 04:50am

KidsFromYesterday182 (100)

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Update soon :]

September 17th, 2011 at 06:25am

amortentias (105)

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Oh my gosh this chapter was so great.

“A girl got me a chicken wrap!” he grinned, showing off the paper bag with the Irish boys favourite food inside. That line made me laugh so hard. I could just imagine Niall getting all excited over a fan bringing him Nandos.

And you're spot on with the personality of the boys, in my opinion anyway. You really did a good job with the drunk scene too - I was just thinking before how I'd love to get drunk with them.

Anyway, amazing update. I hope you write more soon :)

<3

September 9th, 2011 at 03:09pm

imagine. (100)

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I love one direction! Great story, please keep writing :)

September 9th, 2011 at 02:21pm

amortentias (105)

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I've been trying to find some good Larry stories because they're just so cute and I love their bromance, and this is seriously the first decent one that I've found. So I sure hope you continue to write it :)

Beautifully written, btw! And I'm subscribing, so I hope you update very soon :)

<3

September 9th, 2011 at 11:17am

valeqp (100)

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i love it!
please tell me that you're going to keep writing it! :)
you'll make my life complete if you keep writing this story!! <3

September 8th, 2011 at 06:54am