I really enjoyed this. It was cute and rather interesting to read about Melanie's thoughts on her concoction's reaction. I liked that you made her a little bit mad, but now it makes me wonder if I'm possibly mad because I would probably do something similar to this. XD I also liked your descriptions. They were nice and simple. You didn't go overboard with it. (:
Honestly, I laughed because this could easily be something that I would do when I am bored and there is no one in the house other than me. I expected something weird to happen with the mixture, but of course, nothing really happened. But, in a way, I’m glad that nothing really weird happened to the mixtures because it makes it seem like the author is trying it out for herself.
I’m guessing if I did this, mixing all of those things together, I might come up with the same results. :D But anything, this was very entertaining and it was a fun read.
Something about Melanie's antics make me want to go make a mess in the kitchen myself. xD This was cute and enjoyable. It was good to read something a little different for a change. :)
I also liked your descriptions. They were nice and simple. You didn't go overboard with it. (: