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  • TheLovelessXxX

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    it was amazing<3
    December 24th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • cat-vengeance

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    Awww yay!!! That was soo awesome!!! I'm totally going to miss this story but I'm do glad there is a sequel :)
    December 23rd, 2011 at 07:19am
  • StallionDucky

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    aww its over :( i loved it! kinda bummed that its over..and you're right i do hate you for the cliffy its so mean! can't wait for the sequal! it will be a great christmas present!
    December 23rd, 2011 at 05:30am
  • boriquachicka

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    OMG!!! I think I read this in about a day... I could not step away from my laptop. I cannot wait for the sequel. Is she pregnant? When they talked about her being too thin, I was thinking cancer. Now I'm thinking baby. Ahh, so many questions.
    December 23rd, 2011 at 05:23am
  • jenniferbyars

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    I FUCKING LOVED IT................lol
    December 23rd, 2011 at 04:57am
  • Rat Head

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    *wipes tears away* Aw! Anna, say yes! I am SOSOSO sad that its over but even more happy there is a sequel coming! Yay, Christmas Dqh cannot get here fast enough...although I hope you post it at a time when I'm able to read it ASAP (Christmas dinner with the in-laws to-be). Oh well. If I have to MAKE time, I'll read it!
    December 23rd, 2011 at 04:23am
  • Deathless Words

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    This is fucking amazing.
    & she better say "yes" ... If what I think is coming is actually coming... :P
    I'm pretty sad this is over though D:
    December 22nd, 2011 at 02:16pm
  • Rat Head

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    Yes! The end!

    Wait........No! Not the end!

    Dammit, I do and I don't, ya know what I mean?

    Anywho, that was so sweet. I love Brian and Anna! Cuz when you love someone, that's what ya do. Tie the fuckin' knot, and tie it tight, maybe use one of those fancy army knots or something. Sigh. You're making me miss my man even more but alas, only one more day!

    I really hate thinking about the end of this....wahhhhh! But- there is a sequel coming! Yay!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:39am
  • StallionDucky

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    aww yay! Brian is the most adorablest guy in the whole entire world! can't wait for the last chapter! its gonna be amazing! and the a/n of course haha.....and also can't wait to start reading the sequal! its gonna be awesomeness just like this is!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:37am
  • StallionDucky

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    aww yay! Brian is the most adorablest guy in the whole entire world! can't wait for the last chapter! its gonna be amazing! and the a/n of course haha.....and also can't wait to start reading the sequal! its gonna be awesomeness just like this is!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:37am
  • cat-vengeance

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    YES!! Go bro go!!!!!!
    Ahh I can't believe this is almost pver
    December 22nd, 2011 at 06:32am
  • candice

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    awwwwww so sweet!!! can't wait for more..
    December 22nd, 2011 at 06:00am
  • littlemisslonely

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    AWWWW! He's just so fucking....ahh! I can't even describe how amazing and cute and adorable he is! There are no words!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 04:45am
  • Deathless Words

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    Omg just post more already, I'm sitting here crying , I wish I could just take Anna out of the story and hug her D:
    December 21st, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • cat-vengeance

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    BRIAN COME GET ANNA!!!
    Or Stella will come get her lil ass back!!!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 06:06am
  • Rat Head

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    Awww! Such a sweet little chapter, and you posted it just for lil ol' me?!

    I can really relate to this by now because my bf has been working in Arkansas for 7 days and I still have 4 more to go before he comes home! If I had the money and a more dependable car, hell yes, I'd be headed his way!

    So I'm totally feeling it :)

    -RatHead
    December 21st, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Rat Head

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    Ahhh! I didn't go to bed, obviously. And I get to chapter 54 and there's no more story! I could cry right now, seriously! Oh well, maybe, just maybe you'll post the last 3 chapters tomorrow because of my lovely comments? *hopeful face* Pwease?

    -RatHead
    December 20th, 2011 at 10:45am
  • Rat Head

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    I love this already- I haven't finished reading it all yet, I'm on chapter 37, but it's amazing! So cute, and I love your characters. Oh, and I love clicking your links to the outfits, characters, etc. I love to have visuals for my characters and build them a wardrobe just as you've done, you can really personalize a story that way.

    You're a very good writer, and the person who commented that this was stupid and then pointed out something I didn't even notice as I was reading...well, they deserve a swift kick to the balls. They must be superduper nit-picky times infinity, because I sure as hell am (won't even attempt to read a story that is not properly spaced, and especially if I see spelling errors) and like I said, I didn't notice.

    Anyway, to conclude this long & rare (I usually don't comment unless I'm super excited about something) comment, keep doing what you're doing. I find your story intriguing and I like where it's going. It seems as if you have it all planned out and I like that- I hate getting really into a story and then, boom! no more updates. Sadly, that makes me a hypocrite.

    And I shall finish reading as soon as I wake up in approximately 6 hours and fix a bottle for the baby, then throw hot coffee in my face and drink some water.

    -RatHead
    December 20th, 2011 at 10:07am
  • blank_pages95

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    Brian's chapters are always soo intense. Whoa, that was super crazy!!! Like an adrenaline rush... I can't wait for these next three chapters; it's gonna be AH-MAZING
    December 20th, 2011 at 08:03am
  • StallionDucky

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    aww poor Brian :( he's missing his Anna-banana
    December 20th, 2011 at 05:11am