Madame Batty - Comments

That was cute. Such a lovely little story. ^_^ Job well gone.

This is amazing! I really loved it. It kind of reminded me of nursery rhymes. I don't know why. I think it's the way that you wrote it. It's written in a really adorable way.

And I think you really brought this character to life. She has such a way of thinking and speaking that you feel like you can connect to her. Even though your story is not that long, I feel like I already know Madame Batty. She is such a creative character.

And this is such a fantastic story. Great job!

So cute!
Hahahah the end is very sweet!

Aww, this was so cute and so pleasant. I can totally relate to Batty because I have horrible eyesight and I can't see anything until I put my contacts in. Gosh this was super duper lovely. and it was also well written. Great job! :3

This was cute.

I loved the banner, and the layout.

I actually found this quite amusing.

I've never heard of anything like this, and this was definitely a cute read<3

You are a great writer as well(:

Well, this was pretty cute. I had no idea someone could write a story about someone looking for their glasses, and keep the reader hooked. You've done it though, so bravo! It takes a talented author to do something like that. :)

I like how light-hearted this is, and yet is depicts what so many people "worst nightmare" might be -losing and breaking their glasses. The description was wonderful as well.

All in all, a most enjoyable read. Well done!

Very cute and interesting. Layout is adorable and I find it ironic that in the end, she broke what she was looking for. No mistakes or at least none that I saw. It was very cutesy, and was just the type of thing I love to read! I love it so gosh darn much! :D Keep up all of your good work!

This looks so cool, just from the summary. The layout is nice and bright, and so is the picture.

This was so interesting! I loved it. It was cute, and very well-written. I like how descriptive this was, and how it wasn't a very purposeful story, but it was nice all the same. I think I love this. A lot. (:

I kind of thought it'd turn out to be scary, but she just ended up breaking her glasses (I've done the same quite a lot with mine). You did a good job with such a little bit of writing. I always love it when writers make something short and sweet. Like The Old Man and the Sea, this wasn't very purposeful, but it was very nice.

I love the story concept, it's a nice funny yet amazing read. I love the way you describe things and the way you write is very good. (:

Is quirky, light, and to the point.

I love how the story isn't the usual seriousness people tend to have when writing short stories s kudos on that. All in all this is a really good short story.

Ahaha, I loved this. xD I could relate to it so well also, so that helped. (;

I loved how quirky this was and how you were able to write so much from just a woman looking for her glasses.

You didn't overwhelm us with details but you put in enough that it kept me interested. Your writing is just really enjoyable and easy to read, it just flows so naturally. It's really amazing. (:

I also loved how you described the character, for some reason I imagined an old lady in my mind, ahaha.

Oh, and the layout was really nice too. I loved the banner! <3 (:

Great job! <33 (: