It was fantastic! You used a great sense of reality, and made it stunning in the process. When Gerard said "Everything is legal in Jersey!" was an amazing ending.
I'm happy to be one of your 100 favorite people, because you're definitely one of mine. :) Once again, that beginning line was just great; it immediately got me hooked because you had me wondering, what was so special about this show? You did a wonderful job at capturing Gerard's stage speak as well; I absolutely adore listening to him talk when he's on stage and it definitely read like I was at a concert.
That kiss. Holy fuck, that kiss. I am completely and utterly speechless. How do you manage to write such sexy... everything? That was just pure and utter gorgeousness and I adored how you mentioned his inconvenient bass; that was just plain funny. And that ending! So Gerard and so wonderful and I'm going to read this again and then subscribe to this as well because I can guarantee that I'll be coming back to it. You've left me nearly speechless, again. <3
'And Gerard did strut over to Frank as he said, "I don't care if you love a guy," and brought him to his knees with one fingertip on his forehead.'
The effect that red-head has on every one...god damn.
And then Gerard pulled away and their hands dropped again and they shared the weirdest look of silent communication, of 'yes', and of 'oh shit'. Then Gerard cracked a Way smirk and Mikey quirked a smile and Gerard put his sass back on and walked to the front of the stage, to the awaiting, awestruck crowd, and flung one arm up like a winning gymnast, and said, his voice slightly raspy, "-Because love is love, brothers and sisters - and everything's legal in Jersey!"