October 4th, 2012 at 05:09pm
Russian Roulette.
This had so much power in it, that it took my breath away. Suicidal thoughts are what I have struggled with through all my life. May seem crazy, but if I was this desperate I would have done this.
This was beautiful. From top to bottom. A couple errors here and there, but that's about it. Beautiful.
It would be sick to call it beautiful but it would be rude to tell you that it's not (because it's beautiful, not in a good way but in a sad way). I particularly adored the part where the narrator realized that she's in love with him. It might seem crazy but I think that this is a quite unusual relationship & habit but really, it seems fun in a risky way.
I don't usually write long comments but really, I kind of feel that twinge in your heart when something really touches you. Not a fan of reading things from a first person's POV but this was rather great. I love it (: