Russian Roulette - Comments

  • uberchrome

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    Actually, the layout had suggested the some-what dark / suicidal theme but I read it nevertheless.

    It would be sick to call it beautiful but it would be rude to tell you that it's not (because it's beautiful, not in a good way but in a sad way). I particularly adored the part where the narrator realized that she's in love with him. It might seem crazy but I think that this is a quite unusual relationship & habit but really, it seems fun in a risky way.
    I don't usually write long comments but really, I kind of feel that twinge in your heart when something really touches you. Not a fan of reading things from a first person's POV but this was rather great. I love it (:
    October 4th, 2012 at 05:09pm
  • warmaiden

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    Russian Roulette.

    This had so much power in it, that it took my breath away. Suicidal thoughts are what I have struggled with through all my life. May seem crazy, but if I was this desperate I would have done this.

    This was beautiful. From top to bottom. A couple errors here and there, but that's about it. Beautiful.
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:43pm
  • Miss Vampire

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    bcuzz Suicidal thoughts and actions is something I've struggled with I would never read a story like this but I'm glad I did just because well I liked it... It made me cry really hard... good job :)
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:04am
  • november_rain

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    …why? No…I..no. I can’t….

    Why…? =[
    September 6th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • Crackwell Green

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    Fuck.
    I feel like crying.
    </333
    September 4th, 2011 at 09:08pm
  • carlaangel86

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    Oh wow!! That was powerful!! I was hoping it would end differently, but it was still beautiful! Maybe it was stupid of me but I never actually thought that people played that game.... I'm sorry about your friend.:(
    September 2nd, 2011 at 04:25am
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Bby that was... intense...
    O.o I didn't expect that ending...
    But whoa..... I'm just.... whoa....
    I agree with what you say at the end, and I'm sorry bout your friend <3
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    You'z an amathin witer 8DDD
    Eet wath osshum!
    September 1st, 2011 at 08:33pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Hell.
    September 1st, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Fucking.
    September 1st, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Holy.
    September 1st, 2011 at 08:30pm