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j'adore moi aussi! <3 please write more I love it so much

omfg "beaute infame" shares my opinions on the grandfather situation. praise jesus!

That was a really nice chapter. I like how polite and calm John is with her. :)

But you know that it always frustrates me when she doesn't tell her family so I was happy Jared was pushing her this chapter.

I always watch the bar on the right of the screen and how much space it has til the bottom of the page and think 'is it going to be enough time for her to tell?' :)

I really thought the:

But "I can't."

thing was cool. My old teacher would always push us to put quote's in sentences.

Update soon:)

This is my favorite story. I get so happy when you update.

woah!! shiz just got real!!! when i got to the part when john saw annaliese with her grandpa I seriously gasped really hard. And my mom wuz like "dafuq is wrong with you?" xD but the story just got really amazing. John is so friggin cute!! I wish I had a boyfriend like that >3> but anyways I can't wait for da next chapter!!! :DDD

Johns such a sweetheart to her! :')

My lord do I ever love this story. It's just so good. I have no words.

My lord do I ever love this story. It's just so good. I have no words.

My lord do I ever love this story. It's just so good. I have no words.

My lord do I ever love this story. It's just so good. I have no words.

My lord do I ever love this story. It's just so good. I have no words.

Aw man, I wish John could've hugged her -maybe soon! Jared and John are sooooo sweet. Ugh, I just wish Lindsay understood. Can't wait for more John/Analiese! :)

omg, aww, can something please happen to that disgusting grandpa! one of my favourite stories, like ever:)

nvljkfdsvbhfjksdnvkev I came back from the concert and this is here <3 I love update soon please

Seriously, best story on here! UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!!!

i saw that this story had been updated and i literally screamed, omfg. but seriously, this chapter. you could feel how conflicted john felt and how pissed off jared was. it was great. another faaab chapter. but i'd still like to see john killing that fucking grandpa.

i saw that this story had been updated and i literally screamed, omfg. but seriously, this chapter. you could feel how conflicted john felt and how pissed off jared was. it was great. another faaab chapter. but i'd still like to see john killing that fucking grandpa.

I say we murder the Grandpa, sick fuck. Great chapter :)

Whoa! That was an extremely awkward chapter. I could just feel the angst radiating of my computer screen.haha
But I'm quite the awkward weirdo myself so it was comforting.

Anyways, this comment isn't complete without a little bashing to good ol' grandpa. I could say he sickens me but that would be an understatement. I'm convinced there are no words to describe just how repulsed I am.

Congratulations, I have never come across a character and hated them as much as I do him. He needs to die and those few word her mom said made me extremely ticked. He isn't going to die before her family finds out, I will start throwing some shit, no doubt, if he gets away with it.

John was adorable as always. That hugging part was awkward, so automatically, I thought it was beyond adorable. Jared so wants to kick some ass. Oh and Lindsey? She can die with the old fart.

haha no I'm kidding, that's really mean but at the same time.......dead serious. Consider updating soon?

(ehh I think I have finally come to a realization that I'm 'decent comment giving' inept. Like, what the hell is wrong with me?)

THAT WAS SUPER SHORT! But ya know I shouldn't complain because you're the writer, and I'm the reader so I'll take what I can get. :)

Does it ever fascinate you that so many people read your work and like it? It's inspiring to me to see people with a passion in what they write.

In any case, I really liked that chapter though you probably know right now how pissed off I am because I am dead set on her family finding out before that piece of shit dies. Which also makes me curious- where you insinuating that he dies in the last chapter by the mom saying that it shouldn't be long, or is he gonna be alive still? I'm not sure.

John was so nice about it, which was so like... I don't have a word for it.

Anyway update soon please? Um yes. That's about all I have to say without it being as long as the actual chapter. Ha. :)