Omfg Olivia, why you be such a bad girl? Haha love this story though(: such a great concept.
But here's some constructive criticism (oh shit constructive criticism?) You should add more details to everyday events and the little things. That is only my opinion though.
loved the update so glad you were able to update today. When matt and brian confront her it will be interesting to say the least. please update again soon.
I loved the update! I think Olivia is going to put the lap tops in Maddie's and Kristie's room and I really hope she does so the guys can find them and they get punished. I can't believe she saw both Matt and Brian naked. I wonder what Benji and Maddie were talking about and why didn't he notice her. I can't wait for the sequel but I don't want this story to end so soon. Please update very very soon!!!
Haha love this story though(: such a great concept.
But here's some constructive criticism (oh shit constructive criticism?)
You should add more details to everyday events and the little things.
That is only my opinion though.
Again, lovelovelove the story.<3