Secrets - Comments

AGDIKFBD;PDB DOLSB DXIKHBGY! NO! You can't end it like this! NO! I refuse

ME AND JEREMY GETTING IT ON! WHAT?! This makes me happy :DD Ha.

AND IT'S TOTALLY NOT WEIRD THAT THEY (us?) JUST MET AND ARE GETTING IT ON! HE IS THAT SEXY, OKAY!

Ha. This is exciting. And I'm loving every single word of it :DD
...I have a black bra on O.O Why I told you that, I don't know. But you know. Both of us wearing black bras. Coincidental? I think not!

I'm excited for the third chapter :D OHHHHH, what if Jeremy's dad finds them. :O Awkkkwaaaard XD

For the comment swap:

You know, even though your layout is plain and simple, it's still lovely and I like the background and how it ties in with the banner and follows the same sort of colour scheme. It's really nice, aha. The summary already captured my interest right from when you mentioned "killing each other", it makes me think that they're like assassins or something and it definitely made me want to read on. Like the person above me said, it started off a little slow but it's still great nonetheless.
She had been looking more into her parent’s murder recently It should be parents' with an apostrophe on the end, as to say parent's is just singular and it implies that something belongs to the parent which is not the case, haha.
Ooh, dun, dun dun. That's gotta be interesting, seeing a guy with a sexy French accent (I just love that you included a French dude in this, I have a weakness for European guys, especially when they drop in random foreign phases into their English! :P) and that he's the son of the person you hate ;o Not good. This is really interesting, I would definitely read on! <33 Good job! :)

This was lovely.

I think the start was a little slow, weighed down by the details. I wanted more alluring action; I wanted to feel it. It was being described to me, and I could see it, but I didn't feel it. I think it's the bit that deserves a bit more attention because in my opinion, the start of a story is most important. :)

I'm intrigued by the whole background to it, though. And I definitely enjoy the idea although a little cliché. There is something very guilty pleasure like about it, for sure. Ooh, and French speaking men are just- *melts* regardless of who you are, you will swoon for that accent. I think it sounds quite harsh and unpleasant on most women though :3

Update soon? :)

:O
I agree with Rose,this is just so..amazing!
I love the layout! How did you do the birds in the back ground?
I also LOVED the summary, it didnt give too much away.
I also loved how you had so much description in it and it seems so interesting! I am definitely subscribing!

Ahhhhhh! Dude! I'm just 'asddfghhjkjkj!' all over the place!
Seriously, details, descriptions, french, JEREMY, everything! Just amazing.
I giggled when he talked in French :DDD I'm a dork, I know.

Oh, Jeremy why must your father be an enemy?

I'm going to whore the shit out of this. Just you watch. I love you. Really.
I love Jeremy too. Ahhhh! I'm so excited!
:DD