Hush. - Comments

This is so adorable and cute and it just gives me hope that one day I'll be in a library and a real nice guy will do this, ha. But seriously, this was such a nice little scene and you're writing is freaking fantastic! Everything was nicely detailed and just right. And the layout was such a plus that added to the story. Great job! I really loved this.

I don't normally go out of my way to comment on banners, but the picture you used for the layout just drew me right in right off the bat. It was really sweet and a perfect match for your story.
Anyway, this drabble is just lovely. It really does convey a very peaceful vibe, and I also appreciate the subtle romance of it. He's not in your face madly in love making out in the library; he's just content to watch her in her element for a while and then give her a kiss. It's just so sweet.
Giddiness overcame his body and he managed to stifle a laugh as the feelings of a small child during a game of hide and seek overcame him. - there should be a comma between "body" and "and". Also, I just love this description so much. It really made me quite giddy myself.
She seemed oblivious of the time, she’d never even glanced down at her wrist to see whether it was time to leave -the comma between "time" and "she'd" should either be a period or a semicolon.
Okay, all done here. Keep up the good work, dear. :)

“Without a second though, he followed the signs to the ‘sociology’ section…

I’m not sure, but I believe you meant thought. That was the only mistake I found in this. Anyway, I thought this was lovely and cute and the banner made this story even more adorable to read. I love how the story went off of the banner because you described everything so well. I am in a library right now and just the smell of this place made your story more interesting. A lot of book lovers can relate to finding that “special book” and really focusing just on that – blocking the world out, so I liked that. The Paris book in his hand fit the concept of this story beautifually.

Before I even read the story, I'd like to say that I really like the layout, especially that picture; that's so, so cute. In that first line, I noticed a small mistake; pouring all her energy into find that one text book... That should be finding, I believe. I noticed a few other mistakes that were tiny but another read through would probably catch them. :) Overall, I thought that this was really, really adorable and I really liked how you kind of left it open to a bit of interpretation; was the boy her boyfriend or someone who just had a crush on her? You did a great job at capturing just one moment, one tiny moment and making so much more. This was just so darn cute and like something out a movie (in a good way) and you did a wonderful job with it. :)

This is incredibly cute, sweet, and absolutely adorable. I love little stories like these as they make me grin like an idiot once I finish them. You captured one moment in time perfectly and executed this magnificently. Your descriptions are marvelous, vivid, and strong. The title fit this perfectly and it was just a very enjoyable cute little story. It almost reminds of that song Falling in Love at a Coffee Shop by Landon Pigg. I love the mysterious air behind this - who is she? Who is he? Does he know her? How long has he spent studying her? Has he ever spoken to her before? Has she ever even laid eyes on him? These little questions tug at my heart as I read over this again and I am in love with this piece. You've done an excellent job. <3