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  • Tipsy.

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    Alright. (:
    November 27th, 2014 at 02:56pm
  • Lucasluc

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    @ Tipsy Returns
    Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. I've actually written about 4 different prologues. I just can't seem to find the right way to write this story. It was originally based off of the original story of Assassin's Creed. So it's sort of alone those lines. Thank you for reading it. I am currently working on Hanru Sazuki and My anime story Kiyo Nakamoto. I may continue Kyle and Eido but if I do, it may be re-written. I'm not entirely sure. But thank you for liking it.
    November 26th, 2014 at 10:43am
  • Tipsy.

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    Man, you're so good! I have no idea why the story title says 'Do Not Read' though. It's worth a read!

    Why isn't this being continued? It's such an amazing concept right form the start! Plus with so many possibilities! The only suggestion I have is that you separate the second para into smaller paras. Makes reading easier.

    Continue this, really! I subscribed, so I'm hoping you will. Great job on the prologue though. (:
    November 25th, 2014 at 10:54am
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