I enjoyed reading this way too much. The plot line moves forward, the story unrolls quite unexpected. Keep thrillin us. The word choice is original as well. Look forward for more. xoxoksn
I swear I will happily wait forever for this next chapter if it means I can see this story ended sometime. I love this storyline so so much and I've already fallen in love with the characters. It's place on my favorites bar is rightfully earned and I will be eagerly checking it's status often as possible. <3
Wow i just discovered this story and I really really like it. I'm in love with the way you write. You truly have a natural talent. My favorite writer here already!
Hey :D This is for the comment swap xD I like the way you write, though I'm not familiar with the pairing... or the band it's out of xD I have no clue who they are xDD Well... don't really have anything to critizise xD
That was just magnificent! The way you right flows beautifully. You captured all these little details that most would miss. Just brilliant. BRILLIANT. God yeah, you're my all time favorite writer! I don't mind how long it takes you to update, this story needs the time to be perfect (just like Spencer). The relationship between Bren and Spence is heartwarming. I adore it.
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. You portray each character with such brilliance...That's really the only adjective I can muster at the moment. The chapters are a healthy length, the details are woven in tightly, the image plays in the mind with ease. No poor criticism. None at all. Your style flows like magnificent poetry, it truly is stunning. I just wish your story was handed the recognition it deserves! In time, in time.
You did good on this, it's really good. xD I follow you on tumblr, so, yeah, just remember I'm slightly stalking you. c: Anyways, this is an amazing story, update soon please. ^-^'