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  • sexMetalbarbie

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    From comment swap.
    I as well am not in this fandom, but I really enjoy the way you write. It's pretty captivating how you drew me in. It flows extremely well, no huge grammatical errors, all in all in really love this. Wish you would update :)
    June 12th, 2015 at 04:00pm
  • goatman

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    Even though I'm not in this fandom, this story is still so great. I didn't catch any grammatical mistakes while reading and everything flowed well. I kinda hate to see that you haven't updated in so long; this is so good.
    Keep writing?
    March 27th, 2013 at 12:33am
  • just smile back

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    Aww :) I like this story. And your write long chapters? Thank youuuu haha. Update soon!
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:55am
  • william.

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    This is a very good story, it isn't normally my cup of tea in writing since I'm more of a slash reader myself, but oh well. Anyways, I hope that you continue on and I wish you the best of luck on this story. It wasn't totally bad if that helps. Aha.

    -Greg.
    June 5th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • been_waiting

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    I wish you hadn't stop writing this because its very well written. A lot of fan-fictions are getting really shitty now a days but yours is so fantastic the way you have structured and written it. I know you haven't updated in about 6 months but I definitely wouldn't mind you bringing it back hahahaha :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:00am
  • Welldream2morro

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    Food... hahaha :P There all so cute! and Jordan being so angry.. *sigh ^_^
    December 5th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    yeah you updated. Food job sweetie.
    December 4th, 2011 at 09:17pm
  • nothingpersonal10

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    really good story=D update please cant wait
    October 11th, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    once again fantastic. Update again soon ;)
    September 27th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • Welldream2morro

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    *nods in approval* i think we should use the sledge hammer;)
    'The tension was so thick that you couldn’t have sliced through it with a sonic screwdriver.' Ohmigosh did i ever tell you you are amazing:) haha
    September 26th, 2011 at 11:16am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Hated it. Definitely hated it. lol jks, this was very good and can I say if you don't get jordan and tay together I will personally kill you.... I know where you live..... mwahahahahaha
    September 26th, 2011 at 09:46am
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