Bleeding Tears, Crying Blood - Comments

  • Call_me_Dot

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    I like the new chapters :)
    December 14th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    I forgot to mention how I absolutely ADORED this part: White didn't like my answer. He knew I had lied to him. He also didn't like the fact I was practically ignoring him. He grew irritated. Rapidly his essence thickened, creating an ominous cloud that filled study. The scent of winter drifted in the air while the temperature cooled slightly. Then I felt him reach out to me. I froze at his touch and my heart was thudding against my chest as invisible fingers stroked my cheek. My face grew hotter when I felt a warm mouth press against my forehead and hands cup my face. The pads of his thumbs swept over my skin softly,

    "Alma. Don't lie to me." White ordered.

    I squeezed my eyes shut, trying to ignore White's real baritone voice that emanated from the toy and the sensation of his ghostly hands. It was difficult keeping my defences up against this kind of attack. I felt my will crumbling."

    IT'S.SO.FREAKING.CUTE!
    December 6th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    I know it sounds kind of stupid, but here I am, being like, "what?White ISN'T just a bunny?" I would've never guessed he's an actual man-or the fact that Alma is in love with him for that matter- and how come those two became friends?What is he really?And why doesn't he save her if he knows how and is able to? Oh, the agony of those questions! xD I think I'm going to have to kidnap him to force the answers out of him, you're not fooling anyone, playing innocent and all Mr. Bunny! xD lol, anyway, I was also surprised the whole telling Leroy what;s going on thing would come later on, but I guess it fits here too =P Poor Alma, being abandoned like that T^T Looking forward to what's next!
    December 6th, 2011 at 10:21pm
  • Call_me_Dot

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    I really love this story, it's so interesting. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :)
    November 8th, 2011 at 04:24pm
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    ...I WANT A BUNNY LIKE WHITE LOL T^T T^T T^T Or Alma's dresses!Or room!*sigh*I adore her style =$ =P She sounds like the girl I've always wanted to be, and this story is, as usual, very interesting. Update as soon as possible please ^ - ^
    October 9th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • Ashlehbob

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    Great story! I love it. Very detailed.

    Look into mine?
    September 13th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • Just_QueenPaige

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    these updates make mondays better! thnx for the joy! buenas suerte en tu colegio!
    September 13th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • Just_QueenPaige

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    Mwahahaha first to comment yes!!!!! Yea another epc story to go with the other epic stories I have followed so dutifully. More please cuz im hungry for some "blood" ;)
    September 6th, 2011 at 04:39am