I thought it was really well written even though the last paragraph seemed a little superfluous. But I love the idea of putting a muggle and wizard together to shine some light in the little girl's world. It was sweet.
so i was just browsing through the weasley tag and i noticed your username! eeek britt i haven't read your stuff in so long (it's bree by the way, new account) and what can i say? i've missed your work! you've really improved from all those years ago <3 i still love your writings and i really have to get around to reading prickled!