Playing Pretend - Comments

"Women like that, don't they?" is deffinitly something I'd picture Ron Weasley saying, but as far as I'm concerned, I don't think this is a fanfiction, is it?

I do like this, the concept is cute and the main characters are adorable, I only wish there was more detail in between the dialog XD Also, I couldn't tell where they were at. Are they at a club, bar or resturaunt? I assumed it was a bar because she was smoking.

You have a lovely, cute way of writing :)

Oh damn :O
I just love,love the picture of the guy looking up^.^ I can just imagine him saying "Women like that,don't they?" That's funny ^.^ Well, for me it is :3

Anyways, I love the layout! It's so simple,but pretty :D I also love how she pretends to hate mysterious guys but then she likes HIM. Hehe, that's cute ^.^ I really loved how the the story was a dialog summary, not like "They met and fell in love." I liked that, it was short and cute ^.^

Oh yeah, the swap thing, sorry, I just wanted to swap for Be Someone, I'm sorry I didnt say it in the journal :/

I liked it. I liked the setting in the drabble.

I love the moving head of the guy in the banner. I love the layout, nice choice of colors.
I love how he is mysterious and she doesnt seem to like that but then again she still likes him. I love the way you describe things and this is a very good one-shot good work :)