Mama, We All Go to Hell - Comments

Good story, well good start :D
I like the plot, maybe even more than Get Off The Ledge And Drop The Knife. It's different <3
Honestly though Frank scares me a little here.
but I guess it's not a bad thing :P
so yeah... subscribing.

I loooooooooved it. It was amaziiiiiing. >_>
Love ya

This is very interesting. A very different plot. I like it. ;)
Love ya
^subscribed^

This is interesting. For critisism.... um, I guess you could like, separate the paragraphs from the dialogue. For the lyrics in the first chapter, it was sorta bunched up and sorta hard to read... I feel like I'm sounding mean. I love the idea for this! And I feel like I can relate towards Gerard's character. I love LeATERMOUTH and would totally do the same if I went and saw them live. I'd scream every word to every song with them XD I love how Frank was so forward, licking his face then saying for him to meet up with his after the show. Amazing:)

This is great, can't wait to see what happens, :) :) <3

This seems interesting, never read a frerard with Gerard being a fan before. I love it already, moreeeeeeee please!

OhHaidurr <3 So yeah, me likey so far :3

Cool story or atleast first chapter:)
Check out mine It would mean a lot