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  • hachie

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    This amazing!
    I mean it started off when they were kids and became best friends but then as they got older, they drifted apart but then they reconnected.
    They became best friends again then they merged into boyfriend and girlfriend.
    So this was before Ronnie went to prison and he fucked up his relationship with his girlfriend fucking his best friend slut of a girlfriend in the bathroom.
    And now she is backing to cutting herself after six years.
    Ronnie was her rock, someone that she could count.
    To see him fucking that whore just shattered her world completely and now she is back to cutting.
    I believe that this oneshot has a HUGE potential to become a full length story!
    Like how she became strong after Ronnie betrayal!!!!!!
    Him going to prison and making him realize that he lost her because he was too drugged and fucked his best friend's whore of a girlfriend.
    I really really really really really hope you decide to make this into a full length story!
    I love it even though it ended so sad.
    November 5th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • Through-the-Night

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    This was extremely well written, like wow. I guess I agree with all the other people, I just truly don't know what to say.
    October 31st, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • november_rain

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    this was amazing, hun... so sad...but so amazing. your writing is incredible.

    drugs ruin everything. they truly do. they break people and hide the truth and turn it into something it isn't.

    amazing story, bestie.. honestly.

    ily bestieFIRlifeee <333

    Molz
    October 31st, 2011 at 09:10am
  • RobinA7X

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    Even though it was a bit sad, I LOVED IT! GOOD JOB! :D
    October 31st, 2011 at 08:52am
  • Johnny B

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    I loved this, even though it was flipping sad!
    October 31st, 2011 at 08:32am
  • carlaangel86

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    This is sooo sad :(... But I agree that you are an amazing writer.
    October 31st, 2011 at 08:29am
  • CraigMabbitt

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    I.
    Don't.
    Know.
    What.
    To.
    Say.
    Err...
    Type.
    OMG.
    IT WAS SO SAD BUT YOU'RE THE MOST AMAZING WRITER EVER.
    I LOVE IT AND YOU BAYBEH!! <333
    <3333333333
    October 31st, 2011 at 08:00am
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