I absolutely love this! I'm not much of a reader of other people's stories (which is ironic 'cause I like to write) but this is amazing! You are such a talented writer and I absolutely love your use of description and the emotions conveyed through the characters :)
I can't wait for more, thank you so much for making my day :)
I really like this story and where you're taking it. I read Diamonds in the Rough and loved that. You're a fantastic writer. Keep up the good work. I'm glad Brooklyn and Brian are potentially working things out. I may not always comment but I do always read. :)
AND JOHNNY'S. Oh man. Have you ever been to HB? I thought that was a rather shady part of town when we were there hahaha. Then again, I was a tourist kid from a town of ten thousand, so I'm kind of a city noob. XD I guess it would be more accurate to say it's not in the tourist part of Huntington lol. I HAD to get my picture taken in front of it though! Anyway, enough rambling. Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Despite writing A7X fiction myself, I don't read a whole lot of it. For whatever reason though, this story caught my eye, and I'm so glad it did. :) I'm really enjoying it so far, it's very well written (with very few mistakes, so far as I could see), and it's got me really interested in finding out what happens next.
I'm gonna subscribe and stick around for awhile. Awesome job, and I'm looking forward to an update! :)