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  • tommo.

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    Yesh, you two :D I like it so far!!! Update soon!!!
    September 17th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • tainted love.

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    Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    This is really wonderful :'3
    Meh likey xD
    September 11th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    The story line is pretty great, can't wait to see where you guys take it. :)
    in emily's chapters, the dialogue needs separated so it's not one big paragraph, or else its very confusing and hard to read or understand who is saying what, but otherwise, pretty good start :)
    September 11th, 2011 at 10:03pm
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