Missing Numbers - Comments

masked beauty (150)

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Contest:1-10
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Good work. nice concept and layout.

November 16th, 2011 at 01:49am

VanishingAct (100)

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Wow, this was beautiful! I don't know what else to say other than I love your writing style, your layout and how the story was so emotional for something so short. It really touched my heart. Best of luck to you in your writing contests from a fellow contestant.

September 17th, 2011 at 06:40pm

Shawn Ashmore (250)

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Uhhhh... WOW! Seriosuly? You got that epicness from simply "A wrist watch with a broken number"??!!

It's abasolutely amazing! It was one of the few stories that captured my interest immediately. It reminds me of the book Before I Die by Jenny Downham, which is one of my all-time favourites. It has similar themes about someone struglling with cancer an needing to let the people she loves go.

I really like your style of writing, very effective and descriptional! I love how the number 4 was used repeatedly at the end, was a really nice touch! Well done, an excellent piece! thank you for entering my contest, good luck! :)

September 7th, 2011 at 09:09pm