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  • Vonnegut.

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    :shifty I can't believe it's over. -Sobs-
    But that was really really really great. <3 -Hugs everybody who said that it makes them want to hug someone-
    January 29th, 2008 at 05:45am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    great update
    January 23rd, 2008 at 09:23pm
  • You Kill Me Well...

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    awwwwww that made me wanna hug someone :D
    January 22nd, 2008 at 04:37pm
  • Star

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    *cries in your shoulder from happiness*
    January 22nd, 2008 at 04:12pm
  • CyanideYouDrank7

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    Awww In Love

    That made me want to hug a kitten :cute:

    Edit: Page Claim
    January 22nd, 2008 at 03:19am
  • AFineFrenzy

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    That was such a beautiful ending.
    I have teeny tears in my eyes!
    Happy ones,
    I'm gonna miss this story so much,
    Thats really the end?
    The end end?
    No more?
    Ever?
    Sequel?
    *pouts*
    But i love it so much,
    misses it already...
    Thank you for such an amazing story, each chapter, paragraph, and word kept me on the edge my seat wondering what hell was gonna happen next, either that or you were constantly making me go 'Awww' at Frank and Gerard's cuteness.
    Well, thanks for a great story and I really do hope there is a Sequel
    xoxo
    Alice
    January 21st, 2008 at 11:57pm
  • xILYxMCRx

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    YES! YES! YESSSSSSSS!

    that was amazing! xD
    you're such an awesome writer. a new ferard, pleaseeeeee? : )
    January 21st, 2008 at 11:56pm
  • Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet

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    That was beautiful and amazing... in my opinion it was the perfect ending.
    Wonderful.
    It was written really well and I can't get my head around how much a perfect ending it was!
    January 21st, 2008 at 11:55pm
  • Alice Verney

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats a beautiful way to propose
    January 21st, 2008 at 11:52pm
  • Nyssa

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    Perfect Perfect Perfect way to end it.
    --Nyssa
    January 21st, 2008 at 11:44pm
  • Star

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    Oh, so you mean that this is the last chapter and you're making a sequel?
    January 13th, 2008 at 08:35pm
  • Nyssa

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    Loved the story, that was a great way to end it.
    --Nyssa
    January 13th, 2008 at 01:18pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    great way to end this story
    January 13th, 2008 at 12:30pm
  • Faded Princess

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    awww. that was a very good way to end this hollie.

    awsome work as always
    *hugs*
    January 13th, 2008 at 08:37am
  • CyanideYouDrank7

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    Awww In Love

    I think I melted a little
    January 13th, 2008 at 05:57am
  • bodysnatcherr.

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    Awh I loved everything about this story. From the way you wrote it down to the title. Very amazing.

    xoxo
    s.
    January 13th, 2008 at 05:35am
  • Alice Verney

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    awesome ending!!
    January 13th, 2008 at 03:31am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    great update
    Awww poor Frank thinking that

    More when you can plz!!!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • Dies Romantic

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    sexiness! that sex scene made my friend happy, cuz he was all horny...

    update!!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 01:38pm
  • CyanideYouDrank7

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    How cute <33
    January 2nd, 2008 at 08:47am
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