Criminals - Comments

please update thissssss

why are you such a douche Gee?? poor Nathan and Matthew :,<

i wanna punch gerard and torelli at the moment. Poor nathan and matthew

I absolutely love this story, it has some of my favorite bands in it (the others being Avenged Sevenfold, Blink 182, and any of their side projects). Please continue!

Yes! Continue the story!

yay frankie's turned to the good side! *wants more*

hehe yes you should continue!!! and congrats Frank for coming to the good side

i love this story so far!!! Annnnd is the guard mr torelli?

i love this story so far!!! Annnnd is the guard mr torelli?

Gee's a bitch and Frank's a (sexy) sadistic bastard
>:(
Cant wait for more :)

awww poor Matthew and i dont know whether to be scared for Gerard or what cuz he did shoot Nathan

hmm i think theyll get caught as karma for shooting the lady in the bank (Frank >:( ) and Nathan (Gerard >:( ) *sigh* im very disappointed in those two but what can u expect from criminals 'eh?

i love this its totally original and Frank was very funny/kinky in it made lol so hard but poor Mikey, Matthew and, Nathan theyre gonna get caught but i wonder of they'll snitch O.o anyways i hope you continue cuz i like this and i do comment on the regular hint hint *nudge nudge*

:O This was so..intense ^.^ I always watch movies about bank robberies and I can SO imagine these guys doing the whole ninja thing! I also love how you add some bitter humor in the chapter where they are stealing. It's funny ^.^

I'd love to make you a layout for this, just message me and we'll choose all that good stuff a layout needs ^.^

I love the idea of them as criminals. So much do I love it. Haha. I feel like Frank should be bouncing off the walls of the van. And yes, he is an adorable 5'4''. He was smaller than me when we met this one time.... I wanted to put him in my pocket.

Oh man, this story is pretty intense so far.

I man wearing all black and a welders mask clipped a climbing harness to the rope and lowered himself down all the way to the floor, landing slightly awkwardly in front of me, then straightening up, brushing the dust from his clothes. At the beginning, I should be switched to A.

Nathan bounced up and down nervously, eyes rapidly surveying the room, grinning at the damage he'd caused. Weird kid. --FAVORITE LINE.

Frank is a kinky bastard in this story. Haha. I loooooove it.

A very explosive start to what would appear to be a very explosive story. I absolutely love it. I will subscribe try to keep up. :)

yes you should continue cause it sounds awesome.