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  • Cherry Road

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    Oh hun, no worries about the time you take to update. I completely understand. :]

    But oh jeez, am I glad that they're out of the mafia building/warehouse thing. I was actually really scared for both of their well-beings.

    Now, what was all this talk about Gerard exacting revenge? Apparently, Gerard has some connections with the mafia that Frank doesn't know about. What are Frank's connections with the mafia?

    GAH. SO MANY QUESTIONS.
    xD

    <3
    May 9th, 2008 at 12:23am
  • Virus

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    :grr: Cliffhanger!!!!
    Now you have to update quickly :!:
    May 8th, 2008 at 10:11pm
  • Harmony77uk

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    That's cute...

    Worth the wait :) Well will be when Gerard explains how he did it!
    May 8th, 2008 at 10:06pm
  • killjoys

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    wow.
    i wasn't expecting that.
    but, im in love with this story. In Love
    April 14th, 2008 at 06:14am
  • KranK

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    that was um...a twist!
    in the last chapter Gerard was surprised at the torture devices....but suddenly hes an old pro..
    it was kinda...weird? hha
    but its still amazingly good...because it just is and i love it.
    April 14th, 2008 at 03:16am
  • Harmony77uk

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    :shock:

    Gerard has had Mafia experience... O_O

    Enjoy your week away :)
    April 13th, 2008 at 04:24pm
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    woah, dude, gerard has gone bad ass!
    i like the way he kills the guy for revenge though.
    at first he was vunerable gerard and now he's veangeful, hot, killer Gerard.
    i like it ;]
    update asap, i wanna know why gerard is suddenly awesome.
    xoxo
    April 13th, 2008 at 03:57pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    o.0 what a frickin twist!! i'm like wtf just happend?! seriously...that was an intense chapter! i'm waiting for everything to come out in the open now...or soon....please?!
    April 13th, 2008 at 06:35am
  • Final Tragedy

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    Whoa; twist. You just tore the carpet out from under my feet. You just confused me...in a good way if that makes any sense at all. I'd really like to know what's to happen next, how Gerard happens to know Antonio. I'm going to be here, waiting patiently for the next update because I want some answers if they are at all possible.

    <3 Jenn
    April 13th, 2008 at 02:40am
  • whiterabbits

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    Whoa! SHIT!! Avenged Gerard! A Hell of a blood bath!? All I can say is Holy Holy HOLY SHIT!! And, really, That Was Awesome! ;p Please hurry back! I'm loving the Tarantino Geezus!! -Carrying his (soon to be??? Pretty please??) loverboy over his shoulder! Just a completely awesome updatet! Thank you grandly!! <333
    April 13th, 2008 at 01:49am
  • omg ur so straight!

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    yay they got away!!
    April 12th, 2008 at 11:47pm
  • the.sharpest_lives

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    mmm yay. they escape
    April 12th, 2008 at 11:16pm
  • Ryanne Is A Hobo

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    Eekk. Wow! This Is Reallyyy Good!

    x x
    April 12th, 2008 at 11:12pm
  • KranK

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    ooooh...INTENSE..
    Dont HURT MY FRANKIE!! :)
    or Gerard, i suppose... but Frankies small... :P
    April 10th, 2008 at 10:04pm
  • omg ur so straight!

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    torture??? shit!
    April 8th, 2008 at 10:55pm
  • Harmony77uk

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    holy fuck girl this story is so good..
    worth the wait..
    In Love
    April 8th, 2008 at 03:27pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    0_o

    i'm anxious now...really anxious....poor gee and poor frankie!
    April 8th, 2008 at 06:40am
  • the.sharpest_lives

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    eeeeeeeeee yay, update.
    im scared... torture?? uh oh.
    love this story. its my favourite.
    love you
    xox
    April 7th, 2008 at 10:27pm
  • Jelly Tots

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    im a new reader.
    i love this, i really do. im gunna subscribe.
    page claim!
    April 7th, 2008 at 09:07pm
  • Cherry Road

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    Holy motherfucking shit.
    WHAT THE HELL IS GONNA HAPPEN!?!
    Damn you and your cliffhangers. xD

    One mistake here: I decided to do thelast latter. As I softly laid him on the bed and removed my arms from his body, his eyes fluttered open.
    I suppose it doesn't really matter which you use, seeing as we all know what you're talking about, but I think 'latter' is more grammatically correct. =]
    April 7th, 2008 at 09:02pm