that was way adorable...i love the bonding moments....i also like how comfortable they are with each other....it just happens like that sometimes with people, they just click.
oh my my my my.. i sure as hell would fake being deaph any day to kiss that boy XD But how cute : ) Vrank. : D What a wonderful update : ) another one soon please?
i was right! woot! i think that just makes this story that much more amazing that gerard's deaf....i rather like it....i want to learn sign-language really bad....i like gerard's method of learning names....can't wait for more!
*NEW READER* I felt compelled to comment...it's not every day you read an MCR fanfic in which Gerard is deaf. But it adds a very original twist to the story, and I like originality.
Your descriptions are absolutely excellent, they were subtly foreboding. I loved it. I honestly, even after reading the description and seeing the line "talking animatedly with their hands", still had no idea that Gerard was deaf. I must be a hell of a lot denser than I thought. :XD
There weren't any spelling or grammatical errors that I spotted, so you did your proofreading (or whoever does your proofreading) very well.
i think [and until you prove me wrong] that gerard's deaf or at least partially deaf in this story...why else would someone 'talk animatedly with their hands'?! anywho, this story is definitely one of my favorites already and i cannot wait for more....though i will say, it does seem you skipped or used the wrong words in a few places....but it's still a good update.
so i'm rather hooked and i've only just read two chapters....well that's all you have so far, but still...i want more! am i horrible for liking stories where frank's a slut? i can't help myself sometimes.....little blue pills? hmmm....and for some reason, and this might sound really stupid...is gerard deaf in this story? that's just what it seems like from your description....i had to ask.