'I could really go for a smoke.' look at you with jokes and shit. Jeeze, everyone is loving Gibbs in this contest. You know I loved it... but, duh, I love everything you write.
September 14th, 2011 at 08:48am
Trying to sucker me in with the humpty dance huh? You think that's going to work? HUH?!
It did haha I loved it. You explained her change very, very well and it really was kind of depressing how much she hated herself. Kind of reminded me of Melanie when she came home with Ben. Austin is hot. My favorite line was when he asked her when she fell out of love and she said the night before. Perfect.
Great job (: