Light Sea Green - Comments

  • aubs

    aubs (420)

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    I just want to say that I didn’t expect her to be a patient in an insane asylum. I actually thought this was going to be a happy story with a happy ending. But, I was completely wrong, which is good. I adore stories where I think one thing is going to happen, but I’m wrong. So, I must say that the middle and ending of this story caught me by surprise because it wasn’t what I was expecting.

    Anyway, I frowned when she found out he wasn’t the god that she thought he was. I found it rather sad for the both of them – she was wrong about the guy she obsessed about and he died in the end. Goodness, I don’t really know what else to say about this. I just can’t really describe how much I really like this one-shot.

    However, they was one thing that bothered me about this one-shot is how some parts of the story weren’t properly spaced. I mean, it didn’t make me hate the story (which I don’t), it just bothered me a little bit. But overall, this was a wonderful and rather chilly one-shot!
    October 5th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • crescendo.

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    That was very nice. I liked the way you wrote it, with not too much detail, yet enough to keep the reader focused.
    September 18th, 2011 at 07:27pm