True Colors. - Comments

So I decided to check your Zacky fan fiction out and so far so good. This story had me on the edge of my seat. I really thought he was going to kill her, but I loved the ending. You're a great Author! (: I'm going to check your other ones out now.

First of all, I love the song True Colors, it's one of my favorites.

I really liked this story, it was really interesting to see the Avenged Sevenfold guys in a gang instead of a band, it was quite interesting and although I rarely read fan-fiction, I reckon this one is quite different. I also liked how when you hear the song, killing and murdering isn't what you'd immeadiatly think of.
There were a few grammar errors, a few capitals you missed out and there were some minor spelling mistakes but apart from that there was nothing wrong with it. I enjoyed it and really liked how you put the song lines into the story, it really added to it, so well done and good luck with the contests :)

OMG!! I absolutely loved this. Not even lying at all. I loved it and it brought back all the times I've read A7x. I haven't in so long. Amazing story. Thanks again. Good luck!<3