Love Esme she gives good advice and makes a valid point to Rosalie anyhoo I hope tht Kaelynand Emmett talks things out and hopefully she tells him about her cancer, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I really hope Kaelyn and Emmett can work everything out and Emmett can finally leave Rosalie! I hope he can find the courage to return her dads dog tags back to her and make everything right before it is too late! She really should tell Emmett and Paul about her condition! Update soon!
My feels r just tearing apart for Emmett right now becuz he doesn't want Kaelyn to die in the hands of Rosalie but I thought it was funny how he dissed Rosalie like she actually thought tht everything is ok with her and Emmett bitch please u lost tht privilege the moment u threaten Emmett's soul mate's life so nice try but not happening, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Just remember to keep consistency, like if she has short hair it wouldn't be cascading and in terms of the sex scene make sure you use pronouns like he did whatever to "her" and "him" so the point of view stays the same. I just read this story in one sitting and it's really good so far, I can feel the drama building! Update soon
Tht was some passionate love making it was just hot and heavy and sexy but she needs to tell Emmett tht she has cancer becuz it's goin to hurt him more when he finds out tht she died out of the blue u kno but great chapter tho can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)