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  • so kiss me;

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    good for Allie, she deserves someone better than Patrick. Ashlyn too actually
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:56pm
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    onward to the sequel! :)
    November 7th, 2011 at 04:35pm
  • Phoenix AZ

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    'Did Ashlyn know there were two strangers doing the dirty in her bed?' ===> Haha, that has got to be my favorite line. But I also like how you incorporated the summary line into the ending. It fits perfectly.
    And Patrick, you prick! You're going to screw the second girl in the bed of the first girl you screwed???
    As much as I look forward to the sequel, I'm sad that this story ended so suddenly and that Allie and Patrick didn't end up together...or even uttered a word to another haha! But I guess that's what sequel's are for?
    I guess I'll just have to wait and see! <3
    October 29th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • so kiss me;

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    :3
    October 29th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • L!GHTS

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    gosh shouldn't they better than to leave the door unlocked, especially since it's ashlyn's room? what if she had been the one to walk in? lol i'm smiling and laughing to myself as i imagine it right now.

    great story!
    October 28th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • Phoenix AZ

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    Erika, finish this so I can start reading the sequel!

    Same with We All Fall Down! I demand that you do!

    :)
    October 26th, 2011 at 05:54pm
  • Phoenix AZ

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    Well damn. That's quite a list Patrick has there. He needs to learn how to keep it in his pants lmao.
    "Please! That girl wasn't just pretty...She was like the Megan Fox of Vista Creek. Now she's like the Angelina Jolie of McCord." <== IDKW but I really like that comparison even though I care for neither lol.
    And I also loved the end when Kelsey and Sara simultaneously warned Allie not to fall for his charms tehe.
    Great update, but I bet the ending's the best! :D
    October 14th, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • L!GHTS

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    *cough cough* manwhore! *cough cough* :D
    October 13th, 2011 at 07:14am
  • so kiss me;

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    excited for the sequel!!! :D
    October 8th, 2011 at 11:36pm
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    :D
    October 5th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • Phoenix AZ

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    Patrick is creepy, and a douche ==> 'My eyes wander over the sea of girls, picking out the really cute ones'. Typical guy manner, but I love him haha. Is that wrong of me?
    And I love how Allie is a typical teenager herself ==> 'She looked at me again but I didn't bother to meet her as a grin slowly formed upon my mouth. "He's cute."'
    But I bet they'll suck together lol.
    Cute update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 04:21pm
  • L!GHTS

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    omg patrick is so creepy haha!
    September 29th, 2011 at 04:03pm
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    cute :) and now to subscribe
    September 29th, 2011 at 06:46am
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    UPDATE!
    September 21st, 2011 at 05:30pm
  • so kiss me;

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    :3 excited for the new re-write!
    September 19th, 2011 at 07:12am
  • Phoenix AZ

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    ^^ oh and comment virginity! ;D
    September 18th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • Phoenix AZ

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    I don't know if you'll find this creepy or not but I've stuck with this story from the very first time it was posted (back when it was titled Fast Times) and I've actually noticed the changes you've made to this new repost like word-wise. Haha, does that make me creepy? I've read this chapter over and over again so many times.
    Anyways, hurry up and update! I can't wait to see in which direction you've decided to take this story now! :)
    September 18th, 2011 at 04:53am
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