The Diner - Comments

the_truth_hurts (100)

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Here from Comment Swap :))

Your summary is immediately intriguing, I'm already interested in Ash's story! So yay on that :3 Your description is impeccable, and I already hate Scott with a passion. Goodness gracious. But I feel like you've really taken the archetype of the unwelcome stepparent and turned it into something that we can care about - since it's been written before, it's easy for people to graze over it or not care much because they feel it's predictable, but honestly, you've already developed your characters so well that my hatred for Scott continues to grow (lol but seriously.) And seeing as you made the last person bawl, I'm nervous to continue reading lol... I'm quite the cryer sometimes! haha.

Oh my god. aaaaand I'm tearing up. just finished chapter two. horrible. oh my god. Fuck Scott. Oh my god. This is awful. I want Ash to be safe, Jesus H. So upset :/

You've written this beautifully. Thank you for sharing it :) I will certainly continue reading it. Thank you so much ^.^

April 3rd, 2015 at 11:34pm

Bludgeoned.Brittany (100)

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this story was sooo amazing.. I bawled fer like an hour... great job:)

January 21st, 2014 at 06:18am

PoppySalvatoreOzera (100)

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This was so amazing ahhhhh

September 7th, 2012 at 12:43am

xXlostxinxloveXx (100)

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This is my third time reading this and it never yet boring love it do much!

September 6th, 2012 at 12:07am

Unexpected. (100)

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*sigh*
Randomly came back and read this. I miss when it was active and I'd be on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next update.
Oh well :) I can't wait for Simon and Danny (;
(But I will. Wait, I mean. Hehe.)

July 31st, 2012 at 08:17am

SmallWonders (100)

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Read all this in 3 hours tonight lol. AMAZING. This is one of my favorites. It's consistent in the style of writing. There is a lot of character build and detail so I can relate and attach myself to the characters. I love Slater. He's my favorite. And damn girl.... You and those desk scenes. ;)

July 29th, 2012 at 09:46am

Ninja Awesomeness (100)

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I really enjoyed reading this story. I loved every bit of it and I have to say that it was awesome! <3

June 30th, 2012 at 09:27pm

SuperNovaEclipse (100)

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It burns me that this story is coming to an end. I am extremely happy that everything worked out and even happier that they will be starting a family soom. I truly do hope that we haven't heard from Scott because he is dead, and, since there is no sequel, there is nothing stopping me from going with that. Lots of love for you.

June 30th, 2012 at 08:01am

A S K I N G . (100)

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I really loved this story, and I'm really glad that things worked out for the two of them <3

June 29th, 2012 at 06:59am

Ne0nAbyss (465)

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I spent 3 hours reading your entire story and I'm a sucker for homosexual, transexual and bisexual love stories. This was the best story I've read all day; there are some grammar errors but none the less it made the story enjoyable, you should definitely write one for Danny and Simon would be VERY awesome; I subscribed and recommended.

June 27th, 2012 at 02:51am

Flying Flawed (100)

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God that was such a great ending!!! I'm so sad that its over but that just means its time for a SEQUEL!!!!! Or time for me to find another one of your stories either is fine for me. And I agree it would be cool to hear Simmon and Danny's story!! <3

June 26th, 2012 at 12:08am

Unexpected. (100)

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So i just realized it'd be really interesting to hear Danny and Simon's story (;
Simon reminds me of Ash and Danny seems kinda like a big brother, y'know?

June 25th, 2012 at 01:13am

EarthGoddess (100)

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Awww, it's over :( I'm so happy to see them happy, though. They both deserve it so much. I absolutely loved this story, beginning to end, no question about it. There's just so much emotion in it, and it almost made me cry at some parts. All in all, very well written, and a great story :)

June 24th, 2012 at 08:42pm

BlackRosesBleedBlack (100)

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Absolutely adored this story throughout everything that happened. fabulous ending, but I'm also sad to see its end :) :/ :(

June 24th, 2012 at 06:14am

kew_atl (100)

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Omg! I can't believe that's the end! It was a really good ending though!

June 21st, 2012 at 06:30am

love2luv (100)

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OH MY WORD! I am so sad that it's over, but it couldn't have had a better ending! i love this story so much and it was great reading it! Wonderfully written, with vivid characters and actions! I will soo be reading more of your writings.(: keep up the good work!

June 21st, 2012 at 01:20am

TayFreak (100)

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I HAVE HAD IT UP TO HERE *gestures at head level* WITH SHITTY, POORLY WRITTEN STORIES!!

that's why this one was a very pleasing surprise :) loved it, once I started i read the whole dang thing :D Little to no spelling or grammatical errors which was fantastic and just a really excellent read, be proud of yourself.

June 20th, 2012 at 02:55pm