Y u no update???!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! I find it VERY interesting and I think this story is by far have a very interesting plot so pls update! 
May 28th, 2012 at 10:49am
Not much to go on yet. I kinda like where it seems to be going.
I'm glad it's from the predator's POV The talk about what a Bitch Katie is is fun.
The Vampires stories I intend to write also have occasional cheap shots at Twilight. But so explicitly bashing it only alienates some potential fans.
That's my only criticism, besides that it seems cool, and I will read more when it's up.