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  • jeffskinner

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    Sequel is up, hope you keep reading
    December 6th, 2011 at 10:36pm
  • jeffskinner

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    Don't worry it's going somewhere!!!! Thanks for the input guys!
    October 28th, 2011 at 02:57am
  • wethelow

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    Still doing good. I do have to say though, this might be because the chapters are short, I don't feel like it's going anywhere. To much fluff not enough drama for me.
    October 28th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Read through this yesterday and IDK why I didn't comment. Sorry about that! I really like this story, Jeff is so cute. I just love him. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for more
    October 26th, 2011 at 11:46pm
  • jeffskinner

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    Haha THANKS SO MUCH!
    October 20th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • wethelow

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    GOOD JOB!! I have a small problem with marriage talk at 17 & 18 but that's a personal issue. You are doing fantastic :)
    October 20th, 2011 at 06:45am
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    doing great! I noticed you do a lot of "he said" "I said" I would suggest turning some of those into different wordings; "he countered" "came the reply" etc. keep up your lovely work :)
    October 18th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • jeffskinner

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    Haha. I love input it helps me so much.
    October 11th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • wethelow

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    THANK YOU!! Great Job as always :) I will try not to be such a "silent" reader from now on.
    October 11th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • jeffskinner

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    Thanks so much! I will try to make the chapters longer and thanks for your input.
    October 9th, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • wethelow

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    I really enjoy this story. I have to go on a small rant though,
    I really don't think it's fair to hold your story "hostage" the amount of comments you get shouldn't matter on if you post or not. I don't mean to preach or anything it's just you've struck a nerve sorry. The story is looking good though, tiny bit slow moving for my taste and the chapters are short, possible look and see if where you are starting/stopping is what you want to do, maybe some should be combined. Just a little to think about in the future :) like the story though!
    October 9th, 2011 at 05:21pm
  • PleaseRememberMe

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    So cute!
    October 8th, 2011 at 04:11am
  • PleaseRememberMe

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    Love it more and more ever line I read!! (:
    September 19th, 2011 at 02:14am
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    Love it more and more ever line I read!! (:
    September 19th, 2011 at 02:14am
  • jeffskinner

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    thx
    September 14th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • baberiel landeskog.

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    i like this. definitely subscribing. (:
    September 14th, 2011 at 03:09am
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