April 14th, 2010 at 02:48am
Perfect end.
Quoting would make me copy the whole thing here, but this is just the most fitting and perfect end for a bittersweet story.
Like, you portrayed her calm, calm death at the start, and with the flashbacks you went right at the beginning of it all, and closing it with those fatal three words.
I love this one, Jess. I really do. It has... something.
Excellent work, I look forward to reading more.