Sweet Ransom - Comments

This story is perfect :) I love the plot, character, and loads of detail! I hope you write more very soon!!!

So I really really LOVE this story I hope for more soon!

I really like how you go into detail, please update soon. I would love to keep reading this.

I love this chapter and that girl was up to no good. Of course crazy ones would think she was faking. Anyone would think she is faking since she claims to he scared yet Max visits her quite frequently. I like how Sarah seems to feel like she shouldn't belong there. Most people see that when they see someone in a worse condition than their own. There is always someone worst off than you doesn't mean you shouldn't seek help. I'm glad that Max is continuing to reach out to her. Great job like always

Oh my gosh this story made me cry :( I like stories with a character I can relate to, and I can relate to Sarah. I mean, I haven't been thu any of the shit that she has but I can relate to the distrust of men >.>
OK lame comment sorry it's kinda late for me -.- but anyways I love it ^.^

Love this story. It's well worth the wait for the next chapter.

I love this so much :D

love. Hope you continue to update. It's a fantastic story. (that means a lot coming from me.... I'm an avid ghost reader!!) :D but really, LOVE.

I love it!!

Well I'm glad she's trying making progress. :) I'm suprised that she wants Max to come back.

Aww. I like this chapter. It was well worth the wait.

I swear Sarah is so adorable at the end asking Max to come see her and the way she was when she was a teenager damn I didn't think she was that bad. Her rebelling makes me wonder why she was doing what she did or maybe its not complicated and its just a teenage thing wanting to fit in with the crowd or experiment. You did a great job with portraying Sarah and letting her get a bit close but then closing back up again even if she shined a little light that she is slowly opening up. Maybe she can relapse in the near future? with closing up and becoming an addict again? It's always hard to quit for good so if any ideas you run out of you can always go that route :)

Love this please update soon

This chapter is awesome :) It shows her dark side even more with that nightmare and it's a great add. I think its a wonderful trend for Sarah to be chucking things at him when she's mad or afraid. Now you can add that other chapter and all will be good. I wonder if Max keeps reaching out to her and she gets close and all but then she relapses to the life that she had before breaking the promise that she makes with Max ending up him giving up on her completely. Just a random thought. Great job on the chaper

...is it bad I started laughing when she was chucking those bottles at max?
xDDDDD
anywho. I really hope she warms up to max soon. :) cant wait for the next chappie dollface! <3

Yay I'm glad you updated! Thank you for letting me know because for some reason I'm not getting emails about stories being updated. DX. Anyways, I feel really bad for Max. It seems like he just wants to help her out. Hopefully she'll eventually trust him. :)

I like it so far.

I likey C:

can't wait for more (:

I feel really bad for her :( I liked this chapter a lot though! I really can't wait to see what happens. XD I agree with what teenagedream91 said, I'm glad she fears Max and doesn't just automatically trust him. You're a very good writer!