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  • yournightmareXO

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    I just realized there is a new chapter! Loved it, I'm so hungry for more... Ugh well that's so cliche.. Hungry for more...
    Well great update!!! :)
    September 22nd, 2011 at 03:28pm
  • Livi12396

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    aah brilliant chapter! Cant wait for more :D x
    September 22nd, 2011 at 12:36am
  • almostfearless

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    The title of the story immediately caught my attention, and my attention was held :)
    I really like this, and I'm looking forward to find out what happens!
    I like the character of Ash a lot, and Sebastian seems pretty cool too :)
    Can't wait for an update! Great work :)
    September 15th, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • Livi12396

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    know this is gonna be brilliant already :) Cant wait for more! Xx
    September 15th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • Spiral Rain

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    I can tell I am really going to LOVE this story!
    SO Much suspence, so great, so much detail.
    I could picture everything that was happening in my head. I've only read the first chapter and I would already suggest publishing! GREAT JOB!!
    Maybe you could read and comment on mine too?
    :D
    September 15th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • imsuchamess

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    Mkay this piqued my interest. :)
    I'm curious to see where this goes.
    And I like how you write.

    Subscribing!
    September 15th, 2011 at 06:27pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    I'm already in love w this, pls keep goin! It seems amazing!
    September 15th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • c i e l o.

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    Ooh, Ash Stymest is one sexy guy, I'm not sure who he is but I will soon make him my prey.
    I love this so far, I like the plot so far and I ljust love your writing soon. I can't wait to see what you do with this.

    Update soon, love :)
    September 15th, 2011 at 06:18pm
  • mk ultra

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    This is a really clever idea...even though clever is a really stuffy word.

    But yes, it's really good. I never would've thought of Ash having anorexia, but its a really interesting thing to think about. I like it, even though I have a really hard time reading about eating disorders.

    I'm going to subscribe :D
    September 15th, 2011 at 04:52pm
  • Aris.

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    Ash Stymest and a eating disorder? Aha, you took the idea from my head.
    I liked this chapter, not my favourite writing style, but you've got some method.
    Just a question, will this be a hetreosexual romance, or homosexual?
    Update soon. (:
    September 15th, 2011 at 04:50pm