September 22nd, 2011 at 03:28pm
Disorder. - Comments
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aah brilliant chapter! Cant wait for more :D xSeptember 22nd, 2011 at 12:36am
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The title of the story immediately caught my attention, and my attention was held :)
I really like this, and I'm looking forward to find out what happens!
I like the character of Ash a lot, and Sebastian seems pretty cool too :)
Can't wait for an update! Great work :)September 15th, 2011 at 10:39pm -
know this is gonna be brilliant already :) Cant wait for more! XxSeptember 15th, 2011 at 08:53pm
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I can tell I am really going to LOVE this story!
SO Much suspence, so great, so much detail.
I could picture everything that was happening in my head. I've only read the first chapter and I would already suggest publishing! GREAT JOB!!
Maybe you could read and comment on mine too?
:DSeptember 15th, 2011 at 07:27pm -
Mkay this piqued my interest. :)
I'm curious to see where this goes.
And I like how you write.
Subscribing!September 15th, 2011 at 06:27pm -
I'm already in love w this, pls keep goin! It seems amazing!September 15th, 2011 at 06:25pm
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Ooh, Ash Stymest is one sexy guy, I'm not sure who he is but I will soon make him my prey.
I love this so far, I like the plot so far and I ljust love your writing soon. I can't wait to see what you do with this.
Update soon, love :)September 15th, 2011 at 06:18pm -
This is a really clever idea...even though clever is a really stuffy word.
But yes, it's really good. I never would've thought of Ash having anorexia, but its a really interesting thing to think about. I like it, even though I have a really hard time reading about eating disorders.
I'm going to subscribe :DSeptember 15th, 2011 at 04:52pm -
Ash Stymest and a eating disorder? Aha, you took the idea from my head.
I liked this chapter, not my favourite writing style, but you've got some method.
Just a question, will this be a hetreosexual romance, or homosexual?
Update soon. (:September 15th, 2011 at 04:50pm
Well great update!!! :)