Ugly. - Comments

This story is one of the most impressive I've ever read on Mibba. It is well written and full of vivid detail. When I read it I can see the events in my head. A story like that is rare, even among published authors. I demand that you write more.

Ooo, another murder coming. ^_^ I'm liking where this is headed.

Nice update. I really love Loren's character. Can't wait for more.

This is definitely my favorite of your stories. Suspenseful is an understatement. I actually feel bad for the murderer, which is a very hard thing to make someone feel. Beautiful baby<3

I really enjoy your writing style, it's different. I can't wait to see where you'll take this story, so hopefully you'll update soon. :)

Great update! Cant wait for more.

This is really good, I can totally relate to the character, nicely written (: update soon x)

Wow this is really good. I can't wait for the next update, your writing style is very interesting and really draws me in.

Oh wow. The chapters are short but it's perfect that way. It leaves you wanting more and Loren seems like a really interesting character thus far.
Please update this soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG!
This is amazing so far!!!
I LOVE it!
SO suspensful, YOU MUST write more PLEASE RIGHT NOW!!
Great job, great story!
MIH!
-Moe

Ooh, my eyes just widened, my jaw ajar. I love this so far. (That rhymed :D)
I agree, you are an complete genius and your writing style, oh I love. I can't wait to see where this goes, Loren's character steals my attention.

Update soon, love :)

I can relate to Loren already. It's so easy to read your stories, they just flow. You're a genius c: