Until the Tide Returns - Comments

AHA! I have psychic powers! well almost xD

thanks for updating :)

can't wait to find out how her dad reacts tho (since he's all overprotective and shit :P)

Adios.

Bada ba ba ba I'm lovin' this story :D

I want to find out what she is. Maybe have her dad talk to her mom, not necessarily bring her back yet. I'd also like to see a Landon POV chapter. I think it'd be interesting to see how he feels. However, mostly, I just want to know what he writes in that journal lol!

Im sorry about whatever the bad news was, when my grandma died last december i sorta stopped writting for a long time, i only just started again.
and I really like this story
I was thinking that in the next chapter maybe she could get some girl type advice about all the things shes confused about that or talk to tank or someone about the things she doesnt understand. maybe landon but i feel like hes gonna ask her out soon maybe haha
cant wait for more

I have a theory: Beckett's mom is a mermaid.

Yes. My theory-making-skills suck. I really like this story btw :)

:) loraine is like bitchy but in a sorta good way

I loved her POV. It was really cool to see development in the other characters. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens.

Hmmm, Loraine's POV? I wonder what's going to happen that makes it so that you need to have it in Loraine's POV. I can't wait to read it though. And I don't mind the typos. I know they can happen, I do it too. I try to fix as many as possible but I end up changing stuff too. So no worries, you have way less typos than most of the authors on here.

it was a really good chapter and landon is sorta shy but its cute that he likes her lots

I looveed this! I read every word from beginning to end! Which isn't really normal for Ereading for me. I can't wait to see what happens next...

Thanks for responding to my questions lol. I actually looked up the lyrics to the song as soon as you started talking about how it must've been a coincident. Wow, that's intense. I wonder what's going to happen next...

darn cliffhanger -__-

i really like this story
just a heads up there are a few mistakes in chapter 2
just little ones like you forgot a letter or said Know instead of no
its one of the few good original fictions ive found in a while
keep it up

Why do Landon and (I'm going out on a limb here because I'm really bad with names) Simon hate each other? This chapter was great. I vehemently approve :D

I LOVE THIS <333

Here's to being the first to comment. YAY!!!! I like this so far. It looks really cool and I can't wait to read more.