Luna. - Comments

Wow! If I was Ron I would be sooooo mad that Harry, first of all, dated my sister and broke up with her and then stole Hermione. Wow, I would me angry, haha.

This is lovely, I had never thought of Ron and Luna together but you made them fit perfectly! :) I really enjoyed reading this and am sad that it is only two chapters long.

I like the story :)
I think you should continue it, it's cute and natural for both of thier personalities!

It's promising! ^^

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Summary [10/10]

I liked the custom layout, but the fact that there was no visible title or name on the banner bothered me. You have the link to my contest & a short summary with a disclaimer.

The content itself was very lovely. Your writing seemed so exquisite. The description was nice and the ideas were very original. The only part I didn't really like was her "I care about you too!" moment. It seemed a bit awkward. A good thing is that I didn't find any mistakes. I think that this could be turned into a full story & do very well. Please check back with the contest in about a week to see the results.

Xxoo.

I'm sorry. IdonotreadHarryPotter. >.> But I really loved this. :D It was cute and extremely well written, and from what I've seen of the movies, you did a wonderful jobs at their personalities. I could just hear Luna's calm drawl, and Ron's blood hell's. It was extremely well done. I sort of wish there was more, but this is simply wonder. Perfect, I'd say. <3

This was so cuuuuuuuuuuuute! You nailed Luna's and Ron's characters, both with actions and with the dialogue. I love how matter-of-fact Luna was about everything, especially her just coming out at the end and saying, "I care about you too" like it's no big deal.

I think the lake scene in the first part is my favorite, with them playing around in the water. It's really nice to see Ron having fun and letting loose when he's under a lot of stress, what with Hermione and Harry being together and all. And Luna as a character is just so carefree and whimsical that she's the perfect person to help him loosen up.

Overall, the characterization was amazingly done in this story, and I love how realistically you've portrayed a couple that doesn't really get much attention from the fandom. I seriously wouldn't be surprised if people started shipping Luna/Ron (Runa? Lon?) after reading this :)

Great job, and good luck in the contest!

Personally, I think there's enough of the characters and their development to continue. You totally should :)

This was really adorable! I normally wouldn't ship Luna/Ron, but this story made it seem really natural and comfortable. It really seemed to fit together. Great job! (:

I really liked it a lot. Normally I can't picture them together but it was so relaxed and natural that it was just right. Good job. ^_^