I really liked the dancing idea. I know how it feels when yu dance and you feel a fire under your skin. So well done. :) I loved the beguinning with her reading out an essay and then defending it from the teacher. I had a teacher just like that once. Lol. But as the story progressed, the writing felt a bit blocked. Still good, but had no flow, which I think is important in a story about dancing. Also there were a few typos.
I loved the beguinning with her reading out an essay and then defending it from the teacher. I had a teacher just like that once. Lol.
But as the story progressed, the writing felt a bit blocked. Still good, but had no flow, which I think is important in a story about dancing. Also there were a few typos.
Good luck in the contest.
^_^