Be(lie)ve. - Comments

Wow, talk about a run-on sentance. Lol, not really, I know it's supossed to be like that. I really liked how you never took a break or put in a period, which would probably be almost impossible for me, and yet it flowed and never felt like it was broken. And I liked how you put a break in a paragraph ever several lines. It would have been really hard to read if it was just one big block of words, so you really thought ahead with that one. =)
Oh, and I really related to the part about wanted to be that girl who everyone loves. You think she's perfect and has a perfect life, but I know that even thought her life may seem perfect, she's got issues and problems too, we all do. And you may wish you could be her, but I've heard it said before, "If you were exactly like her, then the world would lose something special: you." It's true. We're all special and we all impact somebodies life, and who knows, somebody out there might wish they were just like you. So, I liked it. That's the short version. =)

Yeah I try not to get jelous. Its like posion. And I like what you wrote.
Ok I am swamping for Leaving Happy