This is awesome! I'm sad its over, but thats a fantastic way to end the story!
July 4th, 2012 at 12:29am
The Ninjas of Twin City - Comments
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You ended it rather perfectly. Katherine and Brad are getting married, Star and Robin, and everyone else, and Beast Boy finally proposed to Kaelyn!July 3rd, 2012 at 07:36am
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Great!July 3rd, 2012 at 03:04am
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Well at least there's an epilogue thingy. I really hate but love at the same time, that you keep killing Kaelyn (the part I hate) and bringing her back (which I love).July 2nd, 2012 at 06:44am
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STOP HAVING HER DIE!!! But otherwise, Fantastic job!July 2nd, 2012 at 02:32am
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Who killed the Commander? I'm happy he's dead but I want to know who killed him. I hope it's Beast Boy or Robin. Either way, I love it. I hope she isn't dead again. I'd be ok if she was even in a coma, because at least then she can still come out and is still alive.July 1st, 2012 at 05:52am
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That was a short but kind of cute chapter. "I have no reason to die this time."June 21st, 2012 at 06:36pm
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I love this! Beast Boy's socks would be able to wake everyone up. I would have just ran up there and looked for them but Katherine's plan works too.June 8th, 2012 at 11:44pm
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Awesome!June 6th, 2012 at 04:54pm
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Beast Boy's socks to wake them up...if it doesn't kill them first then it should work. I like how Robin and Kaelyn joke with each other about Beast Boy. "Can't handle your boyfriend's stinky feet?" "For a ninja, you're not very sneaky." hahaJune 6th, 2012 at 12:10am
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Yep, I just read all of this and it's amazing. I did have a feeling the Venus was Kaelyn and Cat was Katherine. I got the feeling with Venus when they were in the hospital type room in HQ, her reaction made me think that she was Kaelyn. Same with Cat, her making comments made it seem like she was having a "flashback". I was expecting The Commander/Charles to kill Robin and Kaelyn's mom.. that was a surprise for me. I can't wait to see what happens next! I really hope her and BeastBoy tell Robin eventually so they can stop going behind his back.June 3rd, 2012 at 09:07am
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Awesome sauce!April 18th, 2012 at 01:41am
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FANTASTICAL!!! They are too cute!!!January 22nd, 2012 at 08:12pm
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Haha ther u r :) wher is everyone else? Lol an thank u :)January 4th, 2012 at 11:38pm
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FANTASTIC! As Usual!January 4th, 2012 at 10:05pm
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lol srry :) schools a painNovember 15th, 2011 at 10:50pm
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FINALLY!!!!!!!!! What took you so long? :~)November 11th, 2011 at 08:57pm
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Sorry, Just realized that made it italicized. its [ i ] text [ / i ]. only without the spaces...
Read Just TrustOctober 21st, 2011 at 09:51pm -
I figured out Italics!! You go before the text then after. Otherwise the whole thing is italics!!!
Read my new story: Just Trust.
Its a Maradaurs FanFic!!!October 21st, 2011 at 09:49pm -
OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!October 19th, 2011 at 10:45pm
