This is adorable. I love it. I love Gerard, and Ryan. A story about the two of them? Perfect in my book. I love your writing, and I love the layout too. And I like the plot so far, and how adorable the two of them are right now. Excellent job!
i really like it- i hope you'll update soon. and that part about what's funny and what isn't ( i mean that seconds paragraph, i guess) is brilliant. i don't know how you could form these thoughts into words so perfectly, but you did :)