Society Killed the Teenager - Comments

I love it!!
Can't wait till you update!

This was really good I like it a lot! Maybe it was just me but it all seemed a little rushed.. You have a knack for writing realistic fiction. I'm still bullied -.-

i loved it!

That's terrible! Horrible. But it's such present issue... I'm glad you wrote this. (:

This was pretty good. In some places the dialogue was a bit awkward, because I could never see anyone talk like that. But it was very emotional, in a good way. I liked that it was realistic, even if in some places it was a bit awkward. I did like this, and I think I'll read your other story, too. (:

Holy crud. This was just… emotional. Unfortunately, insults such as what the girls were saying can result in someone taking their own life. What I’m basically trying to say is that this could happen to anyone. Which is quite unfortunate. But I think it makes this whole one-shot more realistic.

You have really captured the deepest evil that sprouts up into some people. I can’t believe those girls were saying all those mean things about Jane. Poor Jane. But what’s worse is that those insults resulted in Jane killing herself. Anyway, this was just wonderfully written and just so amazing. Good job!

beautiful and just so relevant. i love it.

I like this :) Though I feel like some parts of it are a little bit extreme, I haven't really been in this kind of a position, so I don't really know anything.

This is really beautiful. And very relevant too. Love it!