September 8th, 2012 at 10:54pm
Society Killed the Teenager - Comments
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This was really good I like it a lot! Maybe it was just me but it all seemed a little rushed.. You have a knack for writing realistic fiction. I'm still bullied -.-October 7th, 2011 at 12:32am
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i loved it!September 28th, 2011 at 01:02pm
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That's terrible! Horrible. But it's such present issue... I'm glad you wrote this. (:September 25th, 2011 at 11:36pm
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This was pretty good. In some places the dialogue was a bit awkward, because I could never see anyone talk like that. But it was very emotional, in a good way. I liked that it was realistic, even if in some places it was a bit awkward. I did like this, and I think I'll read your other story, too. (:September 25th, 2011 at 08:48pm
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Holy crud. This was just… emotional. Unfortunately, insults such as what the girls were saying can result in someone taking their own life. What I’m basically trying to say is that this could happen to anyone. Which is quite unfortunate. But I think it makes this whole one-shot more realistic.
You have really captured the deepest evil that sprouts up into some people. I can’t believe those girls were saying all those mean things about Jane. Poor Jane. But what’s worse is that those insults resulted in Jane killing herself. Anyway, this was just wonderfully written and just so amazing. Good job!September 18th, 2011 at 10:52pm -
beautiful and just so relevant. i love it.September 18th, 2011 at 05:08am
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I like this :) Though I feel like some parts of it are a little bit extreme, I haven't really been in this kind of a position, so I don't really know anything.September 17th, 2011 at 11:47pm
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This is really beautiful. And very relevant too. Love it!September 17th, 2011 at 10:37pm
Can't wait till you update!