That chapter gave me headache ( don't ask why a headache) but fucking haters.... Bitch I bet you write half as good a story as this. And honey a few cute chapters doesn't mean theres no plot It means it's HAPPY FUCKING TIMES!!!
My day has consisted of being in school listening to my friends IPod for an hour and a half and being on tumblr at home :) I'm so interesting xD anyways that's didn't suck -__- I loved it!!! Update soon!!!!
I love this story. I don't care what anyone says about it. The part where Frank asked Gerard if he trusted him kind of made me think of Aladdin. Maybe it's just me but I thought it was cute xD Anyways can't wait to see the next chapter. I kinda wonder if Frank's father is going to find out what's going on
Today was my friend's birthday. I made her four cards, one list of reasons why people are obsessed with her, an end of day birthday report, and a prettyful picture. She got so much stuff. xD
I personally think this story has too much smut. And you repeated the boyfriend and "I love you" scene. Plus you double posted several chapters. Also this story doesn't seem to be going any where. Sorry if I sounded like a hater, I always give serious feedback if I feel like it is needed.