Let Go - Comments

  • Heartswell.

    Heartswell. (400)

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    The Way:
    The Rise And Fall Of Thy's OneShots: Let go

    You're bound to be a fave author now.
    That was exquisite.
    So much is so little words.

    Into another day of hoping...

    The sincerity of the emotion just spills through your writing.
    Description, atmosphere, grammar, all check.
    You use such beautiful yet simple wording.
    It leaves a good impression/impact.
    Memorable, I think is the word.

    Though I'd suggest a better title for your one-shot collection, I'm actually liking a lot of your work now.

    Well-done.
    penguin massacre:
    Let Go...
    liquefied ignorance...just perfect use of words.
    Otherwise, it was a little short to comment on...but still beautifully written as were the other three.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 08:48pm
  • grandma eater.

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    Wow, you have a great vocabulary, it's amazing (:
    Wonderful. : )

    ps; if you have the time could you please read my story : take me , I am the drug.

    please and thank you : )
    March 2nd, 2008 at 08:25pm