You're bound to be a fave author now. That was exquisite. So much is so little words.
Into another day of hoping...
The sincerity of the emotion just spills through your writing. Description, atmosphere, grammar, all check. You use such beautiful yet simple wording. It leaves a good impression/impact. Memorable, I think is the word.
Though I'd suggest a better title for your one-shot collection, I'm actually liking a lot of your work now.
Well-done.
penguin massacre:
Let Go... liquefied ignorance...just perfect use of words. Otherwise, it was a little short to comment on...but still beautifully written as were the other three.