Make Up. - Comments

It's short but I like it. I'd love to see more updates soon!

update soon

thank you update soon love this

I fucking missed this!!!

more more more more more i love this please update soon soo good

I hope they tell Zacky's family about her and all..I just hope Rain doesn't get hurt from her father if/when he finds out. I hope all goes well for her now. At least they know! That's good.

At least Matt knows it's her for sure. But whatever Matt's thinking, isn't the way to go. I think Bethany should just tell the guys she's Rain. I mean, they're bound to find out sooner or later. Just tell them now, save some time and possibly save some pain.

She won't be able to keep her own secret for too long. She cares about all the guys too much to hurt them.

Gasp! Don't do it Mattie!

By the way, how old is she now?

Yay! She's back and alive! At least she isn't dead. I wonder if the guys will recognize her at all...?

I wonder if the guys will even recognize her when they see her.

Oh my God, I'm on chapter 12, and I'm crying so hard I can't read ... this is amazing.You sould write books..

What?! She hasn't been around for three months?! You're making me think he killed her!!

Wow! I can't believe she'd go back to him! Like they said, he's gonna kill her...at least that's what I thinks going to happen. If not, then he will seriously beat her...Update soon!!!!!

I LOVE it so update it SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update soon love this

I love this!!! I love how Rain beat the crap out of Gena, it may have scared Rain when she saw what she did, but the chick deserved it. I love how Zacky was there to comfort her when the thunder struck, it's cute. Keep it up!! It's seriously good.

That's interesting that she can only read his thoughts. I really like this story. Update soon please, cheers!

you dont suck... they're so cute!

love it. short chapter :(